yup just wanted to say the intro was suuuuuuuper long, I liked it so far but man man just clicking Z to read for that long was tough, I wanted to start doing things within the first 10 minutes at most. Also not being able to save midway through the intro was killer. Even if it's little things like walking down the stairs or following the princess or guards etc, you should allow the player to move themselves. Also recommend putting little hidden secrets in the world map. https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check this would be a good tool to use if you want to check your spelling/grammar.